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I agree with the comment inserted halfway through the article. The first half is very strong journalism, but the second half takes away from its credibility.

Not saying it is wrong, there is nothing in there that I disagree with, but I believe you will have more repeat visitors if the two halves are kept way separate. Like on different pages. Or a heavy copy edit.

I think the wisdom that applies most here is that you need to leave it to the reader to make these decisions.

Or totally ignore me, I am just another older community college student 🙂